my dream vacation
i would like to visit some island with sunny weather because as i told you before i like hot weather more than cold .In cold weather i fell sleepy. i like get vacation in island with sunny weather and enjoy my time with my best friends . i like to play these sports basketball, volleyball beach, gamble and make partyyyy .
Also i like to go in ocean with boat for fishing , diving, some fun in middle of ocean. i like to take tan also in beach with some beautiful ladyS ;)
I think i can't complete my fun without motorbike , thats why i love to make grope motorbike like 10 motorbike go in street wow
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1 comment:
This paragraph is very interesting. I can tell how much you like riding motorcycles. However, you need to write academic English.
Corrections:
Capitalization.
No slang.
Paragraph organization.
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